purple bones pants

The concept/design is quite interesting. However, better line quality would've made the presentation better. Right now, it looks kinda.... "woolly"?

Tip: During the "construction" stage, don't worry about the line quality, leave it like this. But after getting the main shapes/general idea that you want in your final design, create a new layer on top, and trace over your "sketch", this time... neater.

I hope that helps!